"Her fate was sealed the instant their eyes locked..she was dead..she just didn’t know it yet..She giddily hugged the love to her heart and ran to him..he embraced her closely. She was just sighing in pleasure when he stabbed her in the back..shocked she looked up with accusing eyes …he smilingly said..”Nothing Personal”.
I Fail...I Pass
7 years ago
6 comments:
Simply superb!!
Wonderful piece of 55 fiction :)
Cheers!!
Thanx a lot..I appreciate the words of praise.
Girl u r brilliant. This is so beautifully dark.
I knew you would like it...:-)
Dark.. and awesome.. few words.. and hard actions :D Lovely.. I know how I love ur writing :D
wts wd u nick .. i knw what BLack' means to us .. bt like this !!!!!!!!!!!
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